the underground and me: how my papa tried to save me
by bam
the first draft of history is what journalism’s been called. and so, today, i take a crack at one such draft; i write not knowing quite what epiphany will come, toiling more as an excavator, seeing if there is any shimmering shard buried in the layers of history, my history, a piece of which recently unfolded — in three crisply typed pages — and stirred up the long long ago. turns out, it’s a love story…
it’s not everyday the artifacts of your past tumble out of the cracks of history. but one of mine came in the mail week before last. it was a letter, dated january 7, 1975, written by my papa, mailed to a beloved high school english teacher, a teacher i remembered most vividly because she was the one who asked a prescient question the monday after homecoming of my senior year, a question that foreshadowed the arc — the heartbreaking arc — of that last year of high school.
what i’d remembered was that she was the teacher, the arch, very cool at the time, teacher who’d assigned kerouac and burroughs and zen and the art of motorcycle maintenance, works with their thumb on the pulse of the thrashing that was 1970s america. what i’d never forgotten was standing outside the library on the monday morning after i’d been crowned the homecoming queen, an unlikely event if ever there was because i was nothing like most homecoming queens. i was not beautiful, not even close. i wasn’t a cheerleader, or one of the pompom girls. all i was was kind. and i remembered the names of just about each and every someone in my 2,400-student high school. and all the janitors, too.
as i was standing there, this teacher we all loved and were afraid of, in equal measure, strode up to me, raised one eyebrow, and volleyed her question: “barb, have you read ‘the demise of the homecoming queen’?” a book apparently with a very bad ending.
consider me unsettled. i answered no, and marched on with my day, the query sufficiently stinging.
but that odd interaction has nothing to do with the letter i got week before last. it only underlines the impact of running into this teacher at synagogue a few weeks back, on rosh hashanah to be exact, when a woman whom i did not recognize, leaned into our pew and exclaimed, “barb!!!!” while my brain gears churned to figure out who in the world this was, she went on, and soon i realized it was ms. feder, the high school english teacher we all feared and loved.
as i climbed over the legs between me and the end of the pew, so i could leap into the aisle to hug her, she went on with a story she was bursting to tell me. (mind you, i’d seen her only one other time in 43 years, when i bumped into her on a train riding downtown and i was carrying a baby, so this encounter was swiftly sweeping me back in time and space and emotion.)
she’d been cleaning her basement, she recounted, barely pausing to breathe, and was rummaging through piles and years of stuff accumulated, when she unearthed the first-ever issue of mother jones magazine, and as she lifted it from cobwebs to give it a look, out from its spine tumbled a 10-cent-stamped envelope addressed plainly to “Ms. Feder, Deerfield High School.”
inside, was a three-page letter from my very own papa, meticulously typed by his secretary of many, many years. in it he explains in thoughtful measured tones that it had come to his attention that the underground newspaper, for which ms. feder was the faculty advisor and to which i was a contributor, had recently raised a few eyebrows. scatalogical jokes, perhaps. he didn’t exactly detail, except to mention that they might be “in bad taste — more befitting bathroom walls than a student publication (even an unofficial one).”
and then toward the end of said letter, my papa takes off his official hat — he’d been writing as a member of the PTO board and editor of its newsletter (of which i have zero, zip, nada recollection) — and mentions that, on a personal note, he has exacted from me a promise that my name would no longer appear on the masthead (my first foray into journalism outside the walls of our basement, where i typed up the neighborhood news complete with comics, was the underground newspaper of our not-so-radical white suburban high school). he went on to write that “I have told her [that would be me, his scribe of a daughter] that I feel that her material has been completely acceptable and in no way of questionable taste.” but — brace yourselves — “Frankly, I am embarrassed to see her (and my) name in even a loose juxtaposition with some of this material.” and he asked that my name be deleted from any future publication.
apparently, that’s when i went even further underground and assumed the pseudonym under which i wrote for the rest of the year, or at least until i was taken out of high school in may, and plunked in a downtown hospital, a skin-and-bones girl who’d whittled down to 85 or 90 pounds (i can’t remember the low point), in the vanguard of that scourge known as anorexia nervosa, a clinical coupling of words that grates at my soul (and my psyche) to this day.
some decades ago, perhaps at a high school reunion, one of my fellow underground rabble-rousers had recounted this incident to me, told me the story of how my papa had forbidden me from writing any longer for the Student Voice, as our anti-establishment rag was called. i remembered not a wisp of it, couldn’t imagine my laser-focused-ad-man of a father paying one bit of attention to my underground toils. i considered it apocryphal, a story someone had conjured up over the years when i became — thanks to my early and strange diagnosis — grist for the small-town rumor mill.
thus, word of this letter’s actual artifactual existence intrigued me completely. to say nothing of the fact that i have astonishingly few (read, almost none) letters or personal writings from my dad who wrote two monthly magazine columns for the ad biz. and the finding of even a page — let alone three — was a find of supreme proportion.
i ran to the mailbox day after day. when two weeks had passed, but no letter had arrived, i began to search for ms. feder. i found what appeared to be a phone number, called, left a message. she called back. she’d made a photocopy, she explained, then put the letter aside. she’d forgotten, but she promised to send.
the day it fell from the pile of mail, i took a deep breath and pulled the three still-stapled pages from the 44-year-old envelope, mailed originally from my papa’s downtown office.
right away, i heard his long-silenced voice, oozing up from the spaces between the typed alphabet letters. i heard his tender protectiveness. his measured level-headedness. in fact, he began by defending our faux-radical shenanigans: “While much of it is irreverent, iconoclastic and generally anti-Establishment, that really didn’t concern me,” he wrote. and then, when i got to the part about my promise to erase my name, i got teary. when i got to the part where he wrote that frankly he was embarrassed, i winced.
this is not the memory of my papa i’ve kept tucked closest to my heart. the scenes that have played, over and over and over, are the ones where i’m in the hospital — a psych ward is where they put me, if you must know, and if i’m completely honest — and it’s lunchtime, and my lunch tray has just been delivered, and the door to my room nudges open, and in walks my papa, face beaming, brooks brothers suit crisp as ever, even after his long walk down michigan avenue, from his high-rise office tower to my hospital. he is clutching a white paper bag, one he’s been handed in the women’s auxiliary cafe just off the hospital lobby, where every day they sold sandwiches and every day for that month he bought one. he sat beside me, pulled a straight metal chair right to the edge of my bed, sometimes taking my hand. he unwrapped from wax paper his choice of the day — chicken or tuna salad on white bread, almost always on white bread. he chewed while i tried to. he never missed a day. not once in the month — the terrible, awful, loneliest month — i was there.
and that’s the love i’ll never forget. that’s the love i lost — or so it felt — when he died.
but now i have another story to tell. the day my papa made me give up my name, and go deeper underground.
i cherish them both. my papa was paying attention, such close attention. and i was blessed to be in his sights.
was there someone in your life who paid close attention to you, closer perhaps than you realized at the time? and what was the difference it made?
p.s. perhaps the sweetest part of the letter was that i could show it to my beloved blair, who read it the night it arrived as he rode home on the el (i’d taken a picture of each page and sent along to my mom, my four brothers, and blair and will and teddy, wanting everyone to share in this closest encounter of the typed-and-stapled kind). blair’s texts came in two parts: “Loving the letter. Have read first two pages. So, so wise and precise…eager to see conclusion….” and next: “Wow! Loved it. What a good parent. 3 pages of controlled passion. He loved you so much, Fred. I’m thoroughly impressed.”
the love of my life has only gotten to know another love of my life through the dribs and drabs of story, and now the three long-lost typed pages….
B – this is amazing for me to read…as your older sibling…4 decades later!! OMGosh!! Very poignant comments and observations…naturally I was not aware of much of this back then. It’s really very moving for me to read now. And another side of Dad as well. Thank you so much for sharing. oxox
Thank you, sweet John, my only big brother. Thank you for leaving kind words here, on the morning of a post that was scary and heart-wrenching to write….
Xox
Oh, Barb, your post brought such a smile to my face this morning. Ms. Feder was my homeroom teacher…along with a select group of other teachers I think she was motivated to push us North Shore Creampuffs off the center of the plate a bit. She was the first “Ms.” I knew, and used her teasing wit to remind us good kids to think a bit about what we were expected to do. We had a diverse group of good teachers, didn’t we? I am still in touch with some of them after 45 years.
For years I got emails and letters and phone calls from Mr. Crouch (originator of “North Shore Creampuff”) and Mr. Hollenbeck, almost any time one of my bylines appeared in the Tribune. As if I was being graded every time…❤️❤️❤️
I can only imagine…no, I don’t think I can…as you replay this most difficult?? chapter of your life, what it takes to write about it. O.M. G. Heart-wrenching, to put it mildly. Scary. Yes. But, perhaps, is it at all therapeutic? Hopefully so!! Know that you are NOT alone. I have had some hugs breakthrough’s myself recently. All part of life. Lesson learned and insights gained. Progress!! Big Hugs!! oxox
thank you. xoxoxoxo
Oh my…. This is just simply remarkable… How amazing that an over 40 year old letter from your devoted papa to your high school English teacher should materialize… Oh, and how that dear man came to visit you every day with a sandwich in tow. Bless you both…
I’ve often wondered about your beloved father. Thank you for summoning the courage to tell this tale of his unwavering love for you. It’s a wonderful story. You have made him leap off the page and into our hearts: journalism at its finest. Love you, sweet friend. xxxxx
Thank you, beautiful beautiful Amy, for receiving this into your tender and very safe heart…..
❤️
WOW
I’m too overcome with emotion right now so I’ll have to wait to comment.
I will say this though. Taking my seat at this table continues to be a comforting balm in my life. This tribe of strangers from different locales gathering to absorb the precious wisdom that bam bravely and gingerly shares with us. I also appreciate the “conversation” engendered amongst the commenters. I’m honored to be a part of such a community. 💙
gingerly, indeed. with heart pounding through chest. and, every time, you beautiful souls gathered here scoop me up in your arms, and tell me the truth is light. giant hug, dear dear laura. xoxoxoxo
Wow! Simply wow!
my friend from those very same years at the very same high school, thank you and bless you. and thank you, especially, for your beautiful phone message, just found. you were then and are now, a luminous light. xoxox thank you.
Sending virtual hugs. I’m thinking this whole experience was an answer to prayer. Re-encountering your beloved teacher. At synagoge. On Rosh Hashanah. And then receiving through that re-encounter written witness of your father’s love and attention. Not sure what the specific answer was, but I’m thinking it’s there in that experience. xoxoxo
i know you know the longing for a beloved parent now gone. and, yes, the way it all unfolded…. she is not someone i’d ever seen at synagogue before (i think it was her in-laws or some such that had drawn her there…). and it was totally unlike me to be so bold as to call after two weeks to shyly ask if maybe the letter had gotten lost in the mail. but now the letter is stashed in my drawer of treasures. where reside so many of my paper relics and treasures…..
Wow, wow, wow….cosmic parenting. I loved that you could hear his voice deeply embedded. I believe you got alot of bravery from your dad and he grounded it in love and respect. Your sharing reflects your caring. Grateful and sending so much love your way. xxoo
cosmic parenting. parenting that emerges nearly half a century later. i loved that i could hear his voice too. clear as could be. beautiful thing, one of my brothers said he heard it, too, as he read along, and saw the whole of it, the chair beside the hospital bed, my papa’s hand holding mine, the tuna salad on white bread. and then he told me his stories about my papa. we both had a very good cry. i might never have heard his stories. what are we besides our stories?
I love that BK calls you Fred. Bet there’s a story in there…
You are brave to write and share… and I hope you feel more of the love and less of the “wince.” Love you oodles.
A cousin found a letter my Grandma Swiatek had written – I’d never known her. My dad was orphaned at 16. It was a wonder to see her handwriting and hear about her every day news. These things are treasures. Glad you have this piece of your dear papa.
and i call him the same, curiously enough. and, yes, there is a story.
it’s been an amazing day. a phone call from one of my brothers — another one mentioned to him that there was something here at the chair — rinsed my soul in an unforgettable way. those are the things that happen, i suppose, when truth is told.
i love that a letter emerged in your world, too. what a treasure — handwritten, stitched with quotidian wonders. when we have so little to hold onto, each thread carries so much, means so very very much.
sending love from my kitchen table to yours. i know you saw the moon last night and the night before…..xoxox
Brave Barbie it’s me S.R. Michael with
love and admiration for all you do to brighten and warm my heart with your ultra-awareness and underground river of compassion and most of all your big soft heart of love that never fails. Your story telling is a crazy path that awakens my sixth sense and your sentences have taught me how to do a “close read” and
your books are like mansions overlooking vastness of creativity where I can go anytime for any length and be enriched!!! And “be distracted from all my distractions” for a spell and be renewed.
As long as you’re my big sister I’ll be your
Michael 🙏🏻
guessing that would be “soul rinse” MEM? bless YOUR lovingest hilarious laser-sharp self. you will always be my michael, guardian angel, unstoppable lover of all that is gentle and good. xoxoxox
Temple on Rosh Hashanah … being touched by an unfamiliar hand… the
search to identify the identity… a God moment… ms. feder ..the rush of
memory and then a 44 year old incident to reawaken the chasm left by
one who loved you so very much. No coincidences being affirmed… Such
a vivid recollection that I could see the Brooks Brothers and taste the white
bread sandwich and feel the courage of the soul relating the memory. Bam
dear, you uplift and honor us with your unique vision… you place us there
in time through your creative spirit.. Wish we had known your Dad….and
now perhaps we somehow do…..
Oh, beautiful Gentility, you bring me to tears on this raw American morning. The thought that a seed of my papa has been passed heart to heart just melts me.
Sending love and deep, deep gratitude….
Xo
We know your father through the wonderful daughter he raised, but now you have given us a black and white film of him to watch, Fred MacMurray-like as he walks down Michigan Avenue in his suit, stopping to buy a sandwich, taking the train home, etc. What a precious gift from the past, BAM. Thank you for sharing him with us and trusting us with your difficult year also. We love you and encircle you with a big group hug!
oh, God bless you, beautiful beautiful PJT. i feel that encirclement, a tangled way of saying simply, purely, i feel the love and am eternally grateful. once upon a time i never would have thought i could stand and tell the story i told above. i just love you, and all the chairs. the love felt here has carried me through nearly 12 years….xoxoxo
A long-delayed reconnection requires a long-postponed response. Barb, you have realized the ideals and hoped-for achievements of every teacher,parent, and friend who has known you. Nothin’ else to say.
Tanya (think about it)
Oh my heart just melted…and tears….
From the bottom of my heart, thank you….❤️