counting: an exercise in loving
by bam
my brother started it. my brother who wasn’t yet 20 the night we all got phone calls, urgent phone calls, to get to highland park hospital. it was dad, we were told in those long-ago calls. and it didn’t look good.
there was a blizzard that night, but we all drove through it–two from milwaukee, two from downtown chicago (one was already there, the youngest; he’d walked in the room steps ahead of my mom, and he saw the team bent over my father’s bed, as they tried to start his heart again). i remember holding my breath as snow flakes fell and blew. i remember thinking the edens expressway, the most direct route from my little apartment to the hospital where we waited, i remember thinking it would never end.
three of my four brothers, especially, were too too young for the news–one, the youngest, had only just turned 13, the other two were in or in and out of college, finding their way–too young for the news that would come when the doctor walked stiffly into the hall, gathered us, and we all leaned in as he looked down at the shiny tiled floor, and said only, “i’m sorry.”
that was not enough for me, the one who needs things spelled out, in more refined detail, so i spurted out, primally, “did he die?”
he did. and so five children and a widow walked back into the snow storm, with a plastic bag of his “effects,” a cold and clinical word for the relics of the one you loved.
all these years later, my brothers especially, try to resurrect the faint outlines of the one we loved and lost. my brother, now the father of a feisty second-grader, he especially reaches into the vapors for the father he never got enough of, none of us got enough of.
this week, on the eve of the 39th february 10 since that snowy awful night, my brother sat down and made a list. a beautiful list. one raw, and unfiltered. he wrote all the way to 39, one moment captured for each year since we’d lost the great gregarious eugene shannon, felled by a heart attack, a massive one, at 52.
my brother’s litany of moments was nothing like mine. so i sat down and wrote my own. and my other brother in arizona, he wrote one too. he wrote his on paper and when he lined up the pages to send us a picture, the pages stretched from one end of his living room clear out into the hall.
in all, we counted out a portrait of the man we loved.
the one, i wrote, who “unwrapped from squares of wax paper his chicken or tuna salad sandwich from the Wesley Pavilion Auxiliary Tea Shop at the side of my hospital bed, almost every day, the entire month or five weeks i was there.” i wrote how, that whole long month in june of 1975, he walked down michigan avenue, from his shimmering big-city ad agency, ducked into the hospital gift shop, bought his sandwich, chips and iced tea (tall with lemon), carried his white paper lunch bag up the elevator to the fourth floor, which everyone knew was the psych floor, and came to my room on the north side of the hall, where he pulled up a chair, and sat beside me. he sat beside me the whole while, as i tried to make my way through whatever was under the metal lid of my hospital tray. we ate side-by-side. i was anorexic, and in 1975, no one knew what to do with a girl who’d all but stopped eating, so they signed me in to a psych unit, and my dad came every day. it remains the tenderest definition of love i know.
i wrote, too, of my dad and his affinity for the backyard hammock strung between two oaks, and his red-plaid christmas pants, and his pride in a closet full of brooks brothers three-piece suits (for a kid who grew up in paris, kentucky, with a train engineer for a father, and a country schoolteacher mama, it had been a long and shining road to brooks brothers’ chalk-striped suits). i wrote of the scar that ran down his bald pate, left there by a german shepherd when my dad was six, and climbed a fence he shouldn’t have.
and i wrote about coming home from the hospital that snowy february night in 1981, “finding dad’s creamy cable-knit tennis sweater, the one with the v-neck rimmed in stripes of blue and red, draped over the kitchen chair (i’d always thought it must have been dropped there when he went off from tennis to the ER that saturday morning, and it still hung there tuesday night).” i wrote of “wrapping myself in the sweater, and literally not wanting to take a breath because I didn’t want to breathe in any air from a world not inhabited by dad.”
we wrote on and on, the three of us. and we all wept reading each others’ litanies. it was, in the week that pauses for love, quite an exercise in bringing back to life the ineffable, the ephemeral, the love that slipped away too soon.
we counted our way into the very depths of love. we brought threads of our father back to life just long enough to wrap ourselves in the thick of it, in the heart of him. love doesn’t die, we proved again, counting the whole way.
i know there is grief gathered round this table, and i wrote this in part because the list-making proved so resuscitating, at least for the short while we were hard at work remembering, conjuring, lifting moments out of the vaults of our heart. we typed through tears. we gathered words as traces of a time now slipped away. the time might be behind us, but the love is living, breathing, even now.
how would you begin to count, your exercise in loving?
and may the swirls of love — lost and present — rise up and swirl around you this day of hearts.
💔
Such a beautiful remembrance, you and your brothers’ writings.
Our fathers died two years and five months apart. Mine was 61. I was 24, barely.
The story of your dad at your hospital bedside… what could be more loving?
We never stop missing them.
Love you.
we never stop, indeed. thank God for loves that don’t die……
love you, too.
I’ve been doing a similar thing. I’m reflecting on my parents’ love story this day. They married on Valentine’s Day 1960. Today would have been their 60th wedding anniversary. But they only celebrated 17 with us. Mom died in 1977 and Dad in 1999. It’s important for me to keep that love alive and to let my kids know their story. Remembering is holy work. Hugs to you as you remember. xoxoxo
I love that: “remembering is holy work.”
I think we especially feel the imperative in that, those of us ushered into funerals far too soon….
Sending love, this day of love…
I love that you and your brothers created a list of memories of your dad. What a beautiful thing to do… Remembering is indeed holy work. It’s how we come to realize that our loved ones cannot never be lost to us, not ever.
May sweet memories be a soft cushion for all of us who are missing someone dear to our hearts…
and i just remembered that the tenth of february is a day etched in the depths of your beautiful heart, too. your mama’s day.
xoxox
*cannot ever
I took a little break from a “finish-up Friday” to check in, and now I’ve had to close my office door, blot the tears, hide the tissues and hope no one looks in. Thank you for this, bam. It’s like the “We Remember Them” poem. Feb. 23 will be the fifth anniversary of my father’s death. I was fortunate to have him for 63½ years. But it’s never long enough.
never enough….
you were SUCH a magnificent daughter to him, you with the glorious voluminous heart….
i love the “we remember them” poem/prayer….which, for you, i will post here.
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In the rising of the sun and in its going down, we remember them.
In the blowing of the wind and in the chill of winter, we remember them.
In the opening buds and in the rebirth of spring, we remember them.
In the blueness of the sky and in the warmth of summer, we remember them.
In the rustling of leaves and in the beauty of autumn, we remember them.
In the beginning of the year and when it ends, we remember them.
When we are weary and in need of strength, we remember them.
When we are lost and sick at heart, we remember them.
When we have joys that we yearn to share, we remember them.
So long as we live, they too shall live, for they are now a part of us, as we remember them.
—Text by Rabbis Sylvan Kamens and Jack Riemer from Gates of Prayer, R.B. Gittelsohn
Thank you! Now each line triggers memories and images in my mind of both parents. It’s a wonderful way for me to organize and remember more as I do my exercise in love. Thank you again. You are a blessing to all of us at the table.
Barbara, your thoughtful and sacred ritual blesses us all as we remember our dear dads. I was just reminiscing about my own father this morning with Steve. An experience I will never forget happened when I was very little, the first time I saw some poor areas of Chicago with my mom on the “L”. When my dad came home from work that night, I thanked him for working so hard so I could have ice cream for dessert. One minor example from a myriad of how I felt his love!
Sweet. Isn’t it amazing the tiny moments that rise to the surface? Why oh why? The vaults if memory are mystery and majesty…
❤️❤️
It is heartening to experience the visage as we around the table finger the decades of holy memory beads…each one given great significance because our hearts share similar recollections, yet so unique to our DNA encounter with life… So poignant is that final moment.. that last touch with the beloved that leaves its lifelong impression on our hearts, left to be covered with conjured memories of the parts of our lives made whole by their departed presence… There is no estimate..no tally..to the gifts they gave us…just a wellspring of gratitude poured forth on a list that says we were blessed to have had them and the life they so richly redeemed in being
our own for a time. They live, oh how they live……
what a magnificent beautiful capturing with words here. “finger the decades of holy memory beads….” and your directing our focus, sharply, exquisitely, on the final moment…….
you’ve taken my breath away. thank you…..
Thank you Barb for sharing yourself with us. I find great comfort in you & your brothers’ shared remembering. As I’ve grieved & mourned & grieved some more these past months, I often wonder how in God’s good name I would’ve survived Dad’s death without my siblings. I’m grateful you had & have them to walk this path. May your memories wrap around you like a cloak, some bit of protection against the pain of loss.
sweetheart, of course i thought of you when writing this. it’s so overwhelming, the pain. felt to me like i wore grief like a cloak — curious, you used that very word evoking comfort. i remember being under the weight of it. and the blessing is, at last, it begins to lift, and all these years later i have found myself in moments so alive, so bursting with love, and amazed at the way my life unfolded, it astounds me. i have to believe i carry my dad’s spirit, or at least a good flame of his light, with me wherever i go. when i see a spark of him in my boys, i break out in goosebumps. it’s a beautiful thing, to trace the never-endingness of the ones we love so deeply.
i pray for light to keep finding its way into your beautiful aching heart and soul. and i too am grateful for those sibs who hold you up. and your still newborn baby…..and his big and bounding sister….
xoxoxo